Finally finished writing the second volume, hereby announcing to the respected readers that I will disappear for a while.
The main reason is...went off track.
This book has actually gone off track very seriously, don't know if anyone has noticed. How to put it, I am an author who often writes outlines, but after finishing the outlines, hehe, I just don't follow them when I write!
In short: went off track.
The original intention of this book was to be humorous and funny, but why did it turn out like this as I kept writing? The reason is still myself, because as I was writing, new ideas would pop up in my head, and I thought they were very interesting, so I just went with them.
The outlines and original story designs etc. are not important at all.
For example in the first volume, everything was going well in the beginning. Starting from Forgetting Enmity, I gradually went off track, and the style started to change, as everyone has seen.
Also for example in the second volume, I swear, my original intention was to bring the style back, but the result...
In fact, Lu Gaosheng's original design was not handsome, but a bit short and fat, with a cute look. And this little fatso was extremely timid, because he became the county magistrate relying on his wife.
Everyone in the city knew that the county magistrate Lu was timid and incompetent. The subsequent series of stories would also unfold around these characteristics, and the pace could be written in a very humorous way.
But why is the second volume completely different from my outline?
Because as I kept writing, I had new ideas again, redesigned it, and then successfully went off track. The humorous comedy I wanted to write was completely gone.
Now onto the third volume.
As expected, I went off track again.
But now halfway through, I suddenly realized...I can't tie it back up!!
I'm currently very frustrated. I definitely can't publish the half I've written now, because I may change it anytime, or even rewrite from scratch. This is also my current dilemma - whether to rewrite from scratch or modify.
If rewrite, the nearly 100k words I've written would be wasted. If modify, I would have to first clear up my thoughts and revise chapter by chapter.
Painful, painful.
But everyone don't need to worry about me losing inspiration, because I actually have a new idea now, although it's about a later part of the story, it makes me very excited and looking forward to it.
Compared to readers, what I look forward to the least is Zhang San cultivating into immortality, because from the first chapter, this is a set plot. What excites me usually comes from some random ideas I get, like the new idea now:
Zhang San meets Song YanShi.
But it's not that they meet and start fighting, but more like a conversation, with hatred but also rationality, I look forward to writing something between these two characters.
So please wait for me for a bit.
ose... to cooperate with the protagonist! Shen Yuan: I have a system! Protagonist: What? System: Holy crap, you're just spilling it out like that? Shen Yuan: Let's team up, we'll split the system rewards! Protagonist: Fifty-fifty split? Shen Yuan: No way! Protagonist: What!? I'm the one getting beaten up, and I don't get half? Shen Yuan: Forty-sixty split, I get forty, you get sixty! Protagonist: Deal! Big brother, come on, hit me! As long as it doesn't kill me, beat me like you mean it! Shen Yuan: Don't worry... I will definitely protect all of you! No one but me can lay a finger on you! Guard our Heaven's Chosen Ones! I'm the only one allowed to bully them!
lanned to earn money steadily and take life at a slower pace. But he never expected... his father's remarriage, and the stepmother bringing along a dependent, would completely disrupt his life's plans...
ut it can buy an entire year of absolutely perfect training results! Su Yu stared at his empty wallet and decisively opened up various online loan platforms. “Borrow a thousand bucks! Recharge my vitality!” Boom! His vitality broke a hundred points, shattering the limits of the human body! “Borrow ten thousand bucks! Recharge my combat skills!” Boom! A basic punching technique so common it was everywhere instantly maxed out, revealing the ultimate assassination technique of Five Elements Unity—Inner Force! When a rich kid hired assassins for a midnight ambush, aiming to break both of his legs, they instead ran headfirst into a monster—a human-shaped tyrannosaur, brimming with dragon-like vitality. With just two fingers, Su Yu snapped a steel staff reinforced with alloy. Staring at the killer’s stash of stolen cash—a staggering quarter-million dollars—he showed a corporate-sincere smile: “Thanks for the pre-exam gift pack, Mr. Zhao! I’m gonna go re-invest this!” Three days later, at the National Martial Arts College Entrance Exam, while everyone else struggled just to reach the passing line, Su Yu threw a single punch—and more than a thousand vitality points literally detonated the entire arena!
lities. One day, Qi Yuan was buying groceries when he unfortunately came face-to-face with a monster. Just when he thought he was going to die on the spot, he suddenly heard the monster's thoughts... "This aura, he's definitely not an ordinary master!" "So terrifying, so terrifying." "A fight with my back against the wall, I can't take it anymore." Qi Yuan: Ah, no one told me that my awakened ability isn't telepathy, but rather the stronger my enemies imagine me to be, the stronger I truly become. PS: Zhou Hai in the first chapter is not the protagonist.
